OK, I'm gonna give you some constructive criticism. Your idea was strong. However, I want to make a few points. I think you need more lighting, even if you are trying to look dark. It's tricky, but the audience needs more to associate their surroundings with. You can make your atmosphere dark and visible at the same time. liked your camera positions and continuity. Music during the credits does not fit. Needs to be more erie considering the content. Just my 2 cents (or pence :) Good luck!
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giddyquantity42 2 years ago
OK, I'm gonna give you some constructive criticism. Your idea was strong. However, I want to make a few points. I think you need more lighting, even if you are trying to look dark. It's tricky, but the audience needs more to associate their surroundings with. You can make your atmosphere dark and visible at the same time. liked your camera positions and continuity. Music during the credits does not fit. Needs to be more erie considering the content. Just my 2 cents (or pence :) Good luck!
wildkeith 2 years ago
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EvanAmbo 2 years ago
The ONLY way this woman could be worse at acting was if she looked like she was smiling the whole time. Oh, hang on.
poiuytrewq4321111123 2 years ago
Pretty good
Chipoffurblock88 2 years ago