me singin last night

Paroles :

I was in my room
Alone in my home
I took my Guitar
and let the words go

I recorded myself
Just to try
I didn't realise
that makes me wanna cry

What happen last night
When i thought you are my only one
What happen last night
When i cried all along
What happen last night
When i realised i still love you
What happen last night
when you told me that life continue

As a lonely girl
I was sitting on my bed
Just trying to clean
all the things in my head

My glasses hid my eyes
and no one can see
the tears falling from them
and come down to my cheek

What happen last night
When i thought you are my only one
What happen last night
When i cried all along
What happen last night
When i realised i still love you
What happen last night
when you told me that life continue

From day to day
I feel worse
I think more
And i laugh less

What happen last night
When i thought you are my only one
What happen last night
When i cried all along
What happen last night
When i realised i still love you
What happen last night
when you told me that life continue

What happen last night
When i thought you are my only one
What happen last night
When i cried all along
What happen last night
when U said that U don't mind
What happen last night
Don't tell me to don't cry

Category:

Music

Tags:

• last
• night
• life
• continue

[justiine29]

alors

1) dans le refrain comme tu parles de ce qu'il s'est passe ''last night'' tu dois mettre le verbe ''happen'' au passe, comme tu sais ca devient '' what happened last night''

2) On ne dit pas ''life continue'' deja si on le disait tu devrais mettre un s a la fin, mais c'est une expression et on dit ''life goes on''

3) derniere phrase, tes mots de sont pas dans l'ordre, pr que ca soit just on dit ''don't tell me not to cry''

voila !

bisous ma poulette

je t'aime !

[justiine29]

la chanson est super,

mais tu as fais quelques fautes, tu veux que je te les corrige ?

tu me mamques, je t'aime !