Errands (Dark Poem)

Disclaimer: It's just a story!

ERRANDS

join the queue
look around
nod twice
take the note

cough by the phone box
three times only
await the ring
take the call

tip the bouncer
say the word
slip inside
lift the case

shut the boot
start the engine
follow the van
keep it slow

hit the brakes
kill the lights
give the signal
throw the keys

count the money
make the deal
see the knife
too late

© Daniel Tee 2007

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• original
• poem
• criminal
• dealings
• abasudika
• dan9tee

[FieryAshes]

I'm going to show this to my friend, aka my English teacher, he's awesome and he'll think this is amazing cause I do and we like most the same kinda things.. and.. yeah...

[dan9tee]

Thank you Fiery. That's cool! It'll be ace if your teacher/friend likes it. As long as he doesn't find all the speeling misstakes!! =:D

[FieryAshes]

lol I'm sure he'll like it.. ^_^

[dan9tee]

I'm still awake =:o (My bed beckons though..) Thanks again Fiery!! You're promoting me more than I am! Hugs to you, your boyfriend (who might think it's weird I'd hug him) and your teacher (who also might think it's weird I'd hug him, but what the hay!)!! =:D

[JossLoner]

goood

[dan9tee]

Thaaanks Joss =:D It's kind of a dark video for me, but it's nice to have variety, right? Speak soon m'lady. Dan =:D

[Abasudika]

Hehe, good good =:) Thanks!!!

[FieryAshes]

Hehe, no problem Dan. You're worth promoting so much. ^_^ *Hugs back*... To be honest, my boyfriend might think it's weird lol, but my teacher wouldn't as much.

[dan9tee]

I didn't understand it either... =:S

[dan9tee]

Summer sweetie, you're kind kind kind and very excellent!! =:D

[dan9tee]

Thank you kindly Moomay. Muah! =:)