Free Fallin' 1x09

Alright.. I've been loosing A LOT of subscribers and I really don't know why. :/ Am I writting bad? Do you not like the stories anymore? Cause I understand if you do then I'll just delete them all and wont write..
I dunno.. I got 2 dislikes on my Arranged Marriage and you told me to write it? It's just getting a little fusterating.. :/
I have a life at home right now and I can't spend all my time on youtube writting stories that come right off the top of my head.
This story is REALLY personal to me, and when y'all don't comment and subscribe it's like you don't even want me to write anymore.. if that's the case then okay I wont I understand, I really do..
But anyways.. here's the story :/

Recap:
*With Nick and Kevin*

Kevin-[He bows his head gently onto his cold hands, deciding weither or not he should tell Nick about his problems] Nick.. she's here..
Nick-[His face lights up and his eyes become bigger, browner and fuller] W-What?

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Kevin-[His face soon turns into panic as his eyes become bigger and his soft pink lips open slightly at a crack.] *He had forgetten that Nick was still searching for Demi, the way his words came from his mouth just felt wrong and betrayish.* [He slowly tried to grab Nick's cold sweating hands, but Nick pulled them away before they could even touch.]

Nick-*His eyes become watery, not knowing what to do, his happiness and confusion soon turned into anger and betrayel.* [Nick wasnt the type of kid to let out his anger to someone else, instead he'd hold it inside and think of Demi. Their last moments together, their last soft kiss. And their last final words together.] *He looked down at his blue sweatpants, tears rolling down his soft pale cheeks, making red marks all along like racing stripes. His voice cracked suddenly when he spoke gently to Kevin, not wanting to cry anymore.* Go see her Kevin.. [He got up suddenly without Kevin noticing and walked away into the main lobby where 2,000,000 people would be standing]

*With Joe and Fan Girl*

Fan Girl-[She laughs softly and blushes looking down slightly] Thank you but, I really need to find this braclet. Any chance you might want to help me look for it? [she smiles again back at Joe]

Joe-[At this moment he knew she wasnt like the rest of the girls, she didn't just want to take pictures and admire his very tight pants. She was just looking for a braclet that she had lost and he had the chance to spend that time with her before the concert. He smiled and nodded his head towards the arena] come on.

Fan Girl-[She smiles and starts to look around the arena that they would be playing at] *her jaw drops suddenly, her head tilted to the back of her neck, spinning around slightly laughing at the thought. She slowly brings her head back to see Joe, who was just starring at her, laughing at her reaction* [She smiles huge and manages to speak] I.. wow.. I can't believe you're playing here..

Joe-[He laughs softly and smiles while looking up at the men who were fixing the lights for that night.] it's pretty amazing. *He looks back at the fan girl and smiles while tilting his head a little to the right* What's your name?
Fan Girl-[The fan girl laughs and shakes her head while spinning around again, closing her big brown eyes tightly then opens them and sighs happily] Joe Jonas.. asking my name, if you werent famous I would have asked you that 10 minutes ago. *she smiles her white teeth to Joe*

Joe-[She had a dry sense of humor but Joe liked that about her, even when she didn't mean to be funny Joe laughed away, compelled to her beauty, inside and out] Sorry about that. I'm Joe and you are? *he sticks his hand out to her and smiles*

Fan Girl-*she smiles and laughs softly at Joe, while grabbing his hand* Miley.

Let's pretend Miley isn't famous yet.. o.o lolol
Please comment.. should I keep writting or no? Please :/

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[TheJellylollipop]

i think u should keep writing cause i u're a good writer

btw, don't listen to them they just jealous of u cause u can make a good stories :)

[DisneychannelFAN0205]

@TheJellylollipop awwh! Thank you :) That really helped me :)x

[moes478]

i luv it but dont make so much twists

[iboxyea]

Luv it!!

[hannahbontana]

loved it :)

[JayLo971]

Loved it!!! Keep writing!!!!:)

[LoveMeNicholasJonas]

Keep writing! Your aweseome:)

[babyyxsmilez]

of course you should keep writing, you have no idea how much i missed you updating frequently ! =[

[nataliedancesandsing]

keep writing pleasee??

i love this story.