Unfinished: No Time For Goodbyes MMV

WARNING: SPOILERS! For Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles up to chapitre 221.

Please comment. I'm looking for constructive criticism. I will not change anything done so far in the video, but that doesn't mean I don't want to know what I messed up or what would make it better.

Sooo I felt like trying to make an MMV. Mostly because I have a new computer that has the manga on it but not any animation, and I was missing video editing. Also because I downloaded some custom effects and transitions for moviemaker.

EDIT: The text may be a little hard to read, so I'm putting it in here.
1. The seal of death....
2. I want to remove it.
In exchange for your own life?
3. No. I refuse to die.
4. If I could just go back to that time....


Tools: Windows Movie Maker 2.6, Photostory 3, and Arcsoft Photostudio
Manga: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Mangaka: CLAMP
Music: Get Out Alive
Artist: Three Days Grace


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[TheSoSoHello]

Yay, you made it longer! :D My advice is to make it even looonger (lawl), but also to put a spoiler warning somewhere in the description (since you dont want to change the video).

I also like the colored scenes, they make it a little more real. And I love the effects starting at 1:06

[TsubasaMoriElen]

@TheSoSoHello Hehe. I am still woking on it. I told myself I'm not allowed to put anything else on youtube until I finish this one. Spoiler warning added. Thanks for commenting ^^

[nekokitkat2525hug]

this is extremely well edited some of the colored scenes seem to be a little distracting though. also some scenes pan a little to quick but it does flow with the music, great job. other than that i suggest a spoiler warning and a to get rid of the film effect in the beginning so the viewer can read the text more legibly.

again great job *favs*

[TsubasaMoriElen]

@nekokitkat2525hug Thank you! Which part of the colored scenes? Is it the ones around 1:15-1:25? Also, at the beginning, the film effect is on top of both the text and the picture. I think it might be more legible if I only put it on top of the picture. That way I could still keep the film effect. Sound good?

And again, thank you for the fave, and thank you for the comment. ^^

[nekokitkat2525hug]

@TsubasaMoriElen hmm now that re-watched this several times over the color isnt as distracting as i initially thought. and yeah thats a great suggestion with the text. i cant wait to see the finished product ^_^. i shall subscribe now ^_^ and thank you for taking criticism. i myself enjoy constuctive criticism. it helps one improve and you my friend have great potential and you're editing is quite unique and enjoyable to watch even if this is a sad vid

[TsubasaMoriElen]

@nekokitkat2525hug Eheheh. Thank you. I'm always looking to improve. Though, like I said in the description, I probably won't change anything for this particular vid >.>

Still, I like knowing so I can make the rest of the vid, and future vids, better ^^

[nekokitkat2525hug]

@TsubasaMoriElen yeah i understand and i cant wait to see the finished product and  such ^_^