The Middle - Short Film

David Scott presents his first short film "The Middle". Synopsis: A young man stumbles upon some unusual circumstances and finds himself in another realm of existence.
Starring: Jim Orseno and Jason Drobick

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[hobocamptheater]

amazing, simply amazing.

but there were problems:

I could see the camera in the guy's sunglasses.

when main guy first showed up at the barn and was looking around I saw some rolling shutter (although that could be to add a feeling of confusion and disorientation).

when the main guy was leaving the library the auto exposure kicked in.

all those things took me out of the experience but they're only minor problems which have easy fixes and this is just constructive criticism, not hate.

[from07till]

@hobocamptheater i love criticism its what makes me better. this was actually my very first film. i had never made anything before this. i learn more everyday. check out my latest film "reach"

[LouisElegantRequiem]

Good job with the blend of reality and fantasy. It was hard to tell what was going on half the time, but in a good way. You couldn't tell if he was just hallucinating or what. Great work, keep it up.

[from07till]

@LouisElegantRequiem thanks a lot for watching!!!

[SnapshotOfASoul]

The main character in the flannel looks identical to my friend Cam Mauch :P

[from07till]

@SnapshotOfASoul strange things happen in the middle lol

[from07till]

@AdventureMyths much thanks

[AdventureMyths]

Camera angles, shot composition and continuity are really good. I also thought the score was good. I have used similar tracks for some of our pieces.

[ATruGuitarHero3]

GREAT!

[VanillaVoidFilms]

Interesting. I have also tried my hand at short film making. If you like this, please check mine out.