This is really good, Phebe. Your stage presence has come SO far! Phebe, seriously - write some more originals. Put in a jazz sound, maybe something bluesy, then belt it out and showcase your voice. Push your talent and think beyond kiddy pop, if you know what I mean.
This is really good, Phebe. Your stage presence has come SO far! Phebe, seriously - write some more originals. Put in a jazz sound, maybe something bluesy, then belt it out and showcase your voice. Push your talent and think beyond kiddy pop, if you know what I mean.
newzillah 7 months ago
Awesome Phebe Good Job
ashworca 1 year ago
It's a great start! I'd like to see a verse in here that showcases your vocal talents too - but I love it anyway!
oogleg 1 year ago 2
catchy tune, Phebe! I'd work on the ending a bit. Cool to see you writing your own stuff.
newzillah 1 year ago