song -- do you think you mabe love me too? you dont.
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@Grud78 thanks /blush :)
i know it needs to be longer, it's not done.... i just wanted to see what people thought of the basic idea or if i should just stick to poetry and photography...
im not at all musically inclined so im not too sure how to make a song sound good... while i was writing this into a poem, it came out of me in a song.... so i went with it. i dreamed my first song, so it was easier.....
thatkidmorganmariah 1 year ago
@Theblizzardking i know im not a great singer...... note that im not trying to make a living on my voice. im doing that with photography.
thatkidmorganmariah 1 year ago
Here's just a few friendly suggestions;
-The song needs to be longer
-There needs to be at least one key change
-Sit with your back a little straighter and project from the diaphragm
-Some of the changes in pitch are too rapid for the lyrics, perhaps carry a few notes.
-Perhaps there should be a break with lyrics, but at a different tempo with you either in a lower key or drop one whole octave for dramatic effect
-Be confident.
-The song needs to be longer. =P
You look great, though =)
Grud78 1 year ago
You asked for criticism... It's generically meager. It's missing a real bridge, so it sounds mushed. Your voice lacks the nuance of a great singer, sounding borderline childish. Lastly, the melody is bland, trite, and seethes of a faded, burnt out 80's, possibly 90's, pop song. Alas, Euterpe came to you drunk of poison, and you begot its folly. - Theblizzardking
Theblizzardking 1 year ago