Beast Wars TAS E2 part 3

part 3 of BWA 2.

Category:

Comedy

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• beast
• wars
• the
• abridged
• series
• TAS
• episode
• E2
• part
• P3

[ecwecwecw1]

I loved your work. I think your doing a great job.

[transformersvoice]

Great vid!

[Y2JenJenn]

lol awesome episode two, I loved the battle scene.

[Chidori328]

OH and if you still need a new Rattrap..I'll do it, but only if you'll consider my advice =p

[Chidori328]

In case I should mention this:

Don't be afraid to multiple cast people.

Transformersvoice is a good Megatron and Tarantulas, but he also is a good Rinox.

Note real VA's do it all the time.

Scott Mcneal was Waspinator, Silverbolt, Rattrap, and Dinobot.

In DBZ Chris Sabat was Vegeta, Piccolo, Shenron and Yamcha, among others.

[Chidori328]

Okay finished the video. IN short here's what you need to do.

1. More sound effects, less silences (fill with music).

2. Have Transformersvoice be Rinox, and find a new Optimus va. Have Rattrap's va work on his lines more, he needs to improve but he's good enough not to be replaced.

3. Work on your script more to find the inner funny. You've got potential but you're scratching the surface, if you want an audience, you're going to have to do alot more.

[Chidori328]

Optimus and Rinox aren't very good. TFV is a good Rinox, I suggest picking him instead. Your Rattrap is...meh. He's o-k. But his mike is terrible, either that or he needs to make his voice somewhat quieter..notice the "chopper face" line what his mike does. The series has potential but not quite as funny as it should be yet. Plus there are odd moments of silence you should try to put music in, like at 0: 46. Plus you don't have enough sound effects and you need to make animal sounds where u can.