Kita the Half-blood

my second vid, about a slave girl in the story i am writing. here's the 1st chapter! i was a half- blood.i couldn't help that. i couldn't help that my dad was a human, while my mom was a shaman- wolf. My name is Kita, and our world is beginning to crumble. when i was born, from then, to age of twelve, our world was almost heaven. it was all perfect until mt thirteenth birthday. then, King Hukar was assassinated. the rule here is who kills the king, becomes the king. I'm eighteen now and Sermex has been ruling ever since, but he has changed everything. let me finish then instead of going to now though. Sermex was, is, cruel. he killed all lifeforms, including every single plant. he burned it all. he only kept the livestock we would need. one thing he did when i was fourteen was worse than the most evil thing one could ever do: he tried to take all the half- bloods into slavery, killing anyone who got in his path. he went mainly for the youthful ones. my parents were some of the people who were slain. then Sermex tossed us in his dungeons and put collars around our necks that made it so we couldn't shape shift. people said i got my powers from my mom, and i didn't doubt them. they said i inherited a lot more than that though, they are always saying thing like "you are lucky to have such beautiful silver hair like your mother." or "you're eyes are the same ice blue you're mother had you know" i know that my home page says i am 26, but i'm fourteen :)...there more to the story but you can see that when it comes out. please comment and rate!!!

***For those who want me to email the story to them or post more of the story, i apologize, but that is NOT going to happen. I am not going to post any more of my stories- EVER- onto the internet due to people stealing my ideas and stuff. But i will try and keep everyone updated and tell them when i finish the story and what it is officially called so you can buy your own copy :3

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• kita
• halfblood
• girl
• anime
• wolf
• fox
• OneTrueMedia

[silverfox1896]

i love your story being an author myself i am very impressed great vid too

[silvermoon95]

:3 thank you.

[wolfcrazygirl2408]

what is this from?

[silvermoon95]

The pictures i just got from place off the internet- i think it was photobucket- but the storyline i came up with myself.

[mimiru95]

your story is good for the most part, but you need a lot more detail. if you did that, what you wrote so far would become a good 9 paragraphs, no doubt about it. ive written alot, but if there is one thing about my stories that stays thee same & gets the judges attention is LOTS OF DETAIL. belive me, it helps alot more than you think. just dont overuse it by putting a way lot of detail in one sentence & then like none in the next. thats not how it works. just remember, consistency is key (: cya

[silvermoon95]

:3 Yes, take note though, this was made three years ago. Shortly after making this video, i remade the first chapter; adding about seven more pages of detail instead of just this one. I haven't worked on this story in a little while, but i plan to soon. Thank you for the tip though.

[666Muffin69]

hay.. just a quike question whats the song called??

[1098dragon]

great vid. like the pics. but I cannot undestand a single word of the song -.-

[lockon1994]

you should try devintart for this kind of stuff

[teamedward19963d]

so hows the story going

are u going to make it a book ?

what is this about exactly ?

it's awesome

[cllee88]

an interesting story..i hope to see more soon!

[idk1413]

ahh i cant wait for ur story to finish hopefully soon its really good so far

[143vampires]

wow i can't wait to read more of your story. keep it up!! you are doing great!!

[ChibiPawszz]

please send me a message when you finish your story and what the name is.. i would really want to buy the book, but please P L E A S E dont forget to tell me(:

[TheShapeshifter100]

neat story

[SiligeM]

What's the name of the song! Someone PLEASE tell me!!

[blackfrost713]

Who would ever steal someone elses idea? I mean, Thats just wrong.-Dont worry, I didnt steal Your story idea, Although im creating a story about half animals too- Not called half bloods-Nothing like your story either -Mine follows the topic of genocide(Dont know what it means:Look in the dictionary)Also mine would be a manga not written book. anyways i cant believe people would copy you.