Looking for some feedback before I record and send my official Electric Forest audition video for their Hoop Troupe! Leave me some comments please! Thanks for watching!!
I want to see all the AWESOME things that hoop is doing, but I can't because it's too dark! Will the hoops be lit for the actual video? I also want to see your enjoyment of your play more, either through your face or your body. And you noted you needed some work on a transition at the end, which is something that I was going to comment on. Just make sure those transitions are part of your flow! Otherwise, GREAT diversity of tricks and execution. I was not bored at any point in this video!
I want to see all the AWESOME things that hoop is doing, but I can't because it's too dark! Will the hoops be lit for the actual video? I also want to see your enjoyment of your play more, either through your face or your body. And you noted you needed some work on a transition at the end, which is something that I was going to comment on. Just make sure those transitions are part of your flow! Otherwise, GREAT diversity of tricks and execution. I was not bored at any point in this video!
elizabethpierce1 10 months ago