The Pivot Point

The Pivot Point

Early morning
revelation dawning
It never gets any better

It never gets any better
Never better than this
At a certain point

whether a blow hole
that sucks one in
Or dark worm hole

we stretch to reach
The design of death

Point of the circle a friend to all

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[BadLuckBeat]

Time is like a flower, it grows and the petals fall..Thats what I kinda think of when i think of this.. Life is beautiful, life is tragic, that's the insanity of it all..

[Idlinfarm]

@BadLuckBeat And like a river

[Idlinfarm]

Thanks James. I appreciate your comment.

[brychar66]

A fine poem Ida, with deep roots. It makes me think of Voltaire's 'God is a circle whose center is everywhere and circumference nowhere.' Fine vid too.

[Idlinfarm]

@brychar66 Charles, thank you. I wrote this coming out of a depression from seeing what happens if you live long enough after visiting a friend in a nursing home----she's a Chinese poet friend of Ezra Pound----so, 'clap hands and sing for every tatter.' I purr about this connection with you, Charles.

[MrJoncando]

..well put together vidéo, Mme.....JoHnny

[Idlinfarm]

@MrJoncando Thank you. Your comment means a lot to me.

[keanghiero]

Thanks, very nice dear Ida.

Beautiful video.

have a nice day.

all the best

Kean

[XaveJamesGrey]

It doesn't get better than this poem. As a video, I think the audio distortion works really well as it pulls the listener into the into the moment like the poem pulls the reader into the point.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

lovely lovely lovely! :P