My Immortal- Harry Potter Fanfic Chp 1
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she is the most stereotypical goth ever...since when r we all devil-worshipers? why would we all listen to the same bands? why would we flaunt our stereotypical t shirts that all just happen to be hanging in hot topic which APPARENTLY all of us goths go to!
and i hate vampires...
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This is terrible:
1. She was TWELVE when she wrote it.
2. She's dislexic.
3. She's HIGHLY self concious.
4. Finally, she is borderline personlity disorder.
There ya go.
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You comment on every other word! XD
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I tried to read it, and... It hurt, it truly did hurt. Man, and I thought MY own fanfiction was bad! e___e It still is anyway xD
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@narusasu444 its too good for that
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I read some of My Immortal, just to see what it was. I can't stand how retarded the grammer looks there. My three year old brother could talk/write better than that! Nice commentary, by the way.
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I read some of it and was very disgusted.
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i know right but we can see similar characters
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Really? She's got significantly worse over time.
I'm sorry, I mean tim.
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narusasu444 2 years ago 88
*Kills the Mary Sue*
TaoJenChan 3 years ago 21