Noticed

"Noticed" by Mute Math for ATPI fall.

Your typical love story about a girl and an apple.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• apple
• kiwi
• jessica
• scoggins
• mute
• math
• noticed
• khiara
• ortiz
• jordan
• busekrus
• music
• video

[desktoppriest]

I just watched the video with the song on in Media Player. I have to say that I don't think the video compliments the song at all. That's not to say that the video isn't any good, the camera work and the editing (for the most part) are excellent and miles above what I could personally achieve. The actors appear to work well together and overall the concept really made me think about what the song was about (which is a huge thumbs up!) Keep up the great work :D

[missingmoodring8]

thank you for your advice! what do you mean by compliments the song exactly? Like the timing with musical occurrences within the song?

[greentea901]

so did the apple and orange get together? :P

[missingmoodring8]

haha its actually a kiwi! that's something that I wish I need to go back and reshoot, because it's not clear enough. But no, alas, they are eaten at 4:02

[missingmoodring8]

copyright infringement apparently!!!! youtube and mute math's label got irritated :(

[angelsinflight14]

I rather like the sarcasm; I effing hate Twilight, but Mute Math was fantastic and deserved popularity long before they were featured on the soundtrack. Now it's pitiful how people ALWAYS relate Mute Math to Twilight.

Anyway, good video, this.

[TeamWizard]

This is a real cool vid and this genius mind needs to do more. (: (:

[armandiuxo]

I had to do the same thing with one of my videos. changed the song to hey there delilah

[ladosismortal]

se metio la manzana en la ******

[TheSpiritualife]

perfect, works well with mutemaths song! beautiful video work, you are very good at what you are doing, keep it up:)

as for twilight, i hate it too, but its getting the good music flowing into the secular world of teenage " soft-core pornography" haha

[brendiiuxX2]

The apple is so Twilight haha love Muthe math

[desktoppriest]

My girlfriend likes you video, "very sweet" :D

[desktoppriest]

After I've written the above I've put the video on again (with media player sound) and again, for example, 0:17 - 1:09 is F'ing great! Then there's a scene to change to the car/outside, for me it shuld occur with the end of the chorus/beginning of the next verse. Please don't feel like I'm tearing your work to pieces, I appreciate everyone's interpretations of different things, I'm merely stating preferences, and what I feel is advice. Feel free to ignore me if this rambles. :D

[desktoppriest]

I would say that due to the timing of the song, the longer cuts feel a bit drawn out. (For example) Perhaps a cut for every bar in the song and if you want to keep within a particular scene perhaps alter the POV. I studied media and flim a long time ago so my "advice" may not be too sound.