Broken - my poem

A poem that i wrote to work with my feelings.. It helped me dealing with how i felt..

Lyrics:
You called me and you said my name
You told me, you didn't feel the same
That's when you ripped my dream apart
And left me with a broken heart

For you I must get over it
But you don't know how hard it hit
For weeks and months you were my life
My dream, my day in paradise

Fairytales don't come true, I know
But why is it so hard to let you go?
Some wounds you just don't wanna heal
Dreams and hopes that could have been real

Love is everything it's cracked up to be
But this time it just wasn't meant for me
Love is patient and love is kind
But love can be so hard to find

I'm not the girl I used to be
A cloud is hanging over me
It's not enough just to be breathing
I need something to believe in

To hate you would be better for me
My tears would dry so I could see
I could stop being depressed
So maybe I could get some rest

But to start hating you
Is something I could never do
I know that love has made me blind
But you're too gentle and you're too kind

All I can do right now is pray
That soon my love will fade away
'Cause no matter what I want to do
Right now there's no getting over you

Love is madness and love is pain
But sun will always follow rain
And soon enough it'll fade away
And there will be a brighter day

But do I want a brighter day?
Do I want to let it go away?
Do I really want to get over you?
Is there anything else for me to do?

A part of me just wants the pain
The misery, the clouds, the rain
I just can't stand to let it go
What can I do? I love you so

Category:

People & Blogs

Tags:

• poem
• broken
• lost
• love
• personals

[CloudKitty18]

I like ur poem!! :D

[Ilm0110]

This Poem is Great......I wish i was this good mine is very short!

Tell me what yew think bout it.....

--Sad.....crying....Dying

-I'm cryin & Dying

-Getting swept away lyke dust

-Feeling like theirs noone to trust

-I dont wanna be here

-i dont wanna die

-i dont wanna feel lyke an hour passing by!

[Emilay41]

That voice scared me a bit.

[jj101505]

very good poem you should make more

[coldblud101]

hellla good but the talking made it worse and it was predictable but helllllla good!!!

[zGIRL6351]

@Ilm0110 It was okay........ I guess. XP

[pvtroebuck2]

beautiful voice for a beautiful poem

[27GangstaGurl]

that poem was great...tell me how mines seem (its pretty short) Forgiveness My eyes, full of tears and lies. I have let you down. I sit there and cry. I deserve to die. Lonely and coldly. You pull me up. Up to my feet. You tell me you love me. And kiss me gently. You embrace me with your love. Your touch so warm and nice. My heart turns into a thousand butter flies. (PS its supposed to rime)

[retrogirl4427]

this poem is incredible. i wish i could write poems like this. i only write amature poems. if you wanna read them my blog is on thoughts.com and my username is BrokenHearted4427.

[janessa281]

@Ilm0110 Short but itts guud (:

I Know thatt feelinqq i gett yuu

i likke itt (:

Nice jobb