Will Dixon - Sculpt (Original Song)

A re-worked version of a song I wrote last year that some people liked. Please share it if you like it too!

Also, new camera!

Lyrics:

I read up on where i went wrong I should have known,
To hold your gaze until you looked away,
Hit me with a cliche knock some pieces off of me,
But I'm a sculptor and i'll sculpt all that away,

Let's not dwell on the intricacies,
It's not like either of us has got a disease,
I could have been better, more of a tease,
In retrospect i can certainly see,
The hammer and chisel will serve me well,
I've got a bit of work to do - i can tell,
A psycho sculptor is what i am,
And,
I'm gonna make this worth the wait,
Lift the curtains light the stage,
To keep a promise i never made,
Well never to your face,
I'm making an Effigy,
It's taking all my effort and energy,
A psycho sculptor is what i am,
And i do what i can,

I read up on where i went wrong I should have known,
To hold your gaze until you looked away,
Hit me with a cliche knock some pieces off of me,
But I'm a sculptor and i'll sculpt all that away,

I'm making an effigy,
It's taking all my effort and energy.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• WillsOdyssey
• Will
• Dixon
• Sculpt
• Original Song
• Acoustic Guitar
• Songwriter
• Singer

[faltat2]

i dont get why you would take the video, that everyone liked, off. correction, you made it private... not saying this one is bad, i just prefer the original one.

[WillsOdyssey]

@faltat2 The original version was on my music channel, which I deleted entirely because I realised that splitting my audience was hurting it rather than helping it. Since then i have changed camera and editing software, and in fact lost the original video file, so I can never reupload it to this channel. Having said that, I am quite proud of the song and wanted to breathe new life into it by doing this version to reintroduce it to my audience.

[WillsOdyssey]

@faltat2 Until recently, the original video was still available on the pepsimaxitlegends channel, because of the competition I entered it into. If it were still up, I would tell you to go and watch it to remind you how bad it was compared to this one :)

[thepappytube]

I see people are commenting on how the last one was more energetic. I disagree. This one is even more energetic! Just in a controlled manor. You start small and build it up to such a height I was surprised you didn't either drop your guitar or fall off your chair! But you didn't, because this was controlled energy. I didn't think I'd enjoy this one as much as the first, but wow. This one is 10 times better! I didn't know it was possible to improve on an already amazing song.

[WillsOdyssey]

@thepappytube Pappy, you're ridiculous, but thank you. I'm glad you appreciate the work I put into this adaptation, but it's nowhere near Stairway. Having said that, I'm ready for you to buy my albums too, so I'm doing my best to get this ball rolling!

The camera's awesome!

[watchdog2007]

ok i knew there was something wrong with my microlol when it went over 30 seconds...

[faltat2]

@WillsOdyssey I remember downloading an mp3 of that version off a website back when it was still up, do you remember/have a link?

[beatupbutterfly]

I loved the old version. This one makes me smile. I love all of the work you've put into this. It's a great piece of work; progress is an understatement. =)

[Sweepingreaper4]

Is there anyway I can get a hold of the original video Or atleast the audio?

[jkid1134]

@SmileyIfSinging I know you can download at least the old version. I have it on my phone. :)

[TheWarriorDingo]

Holy feck you are a great song writer.

[SmileyIfSinging]

I enjoy this song. Quite a lot. I would buy this if it were on Itunes, just saying. :)

[ANDYGLOV3R]

Oh my goodness. This is amazing. Dude. Keep this up.