Three Words

A song I wrote today...
about my imaginary lover XD

I hope you like it!

Lyrics:
Happy, happy,
With a smooth stone in your hand,
And warm sand between your toes.
I am...flying,
Over the mountains.
~Watch me watching you,
I love the way you laugh
When the sunlight sparkles through.

So how can you see the sun,
When the sky is always grey?
It seems that you never run,
Even from the worst of days...
Am I ever in your way?

Singing, sleeping,
With your hands around my waist,
I hope you never fade.
You are...perfect,
All I've ever wanted.
~Close your dreaming eyes,
Put your palms onto my chest,
feel our hearts beating in kind.

And now if you want to run,
Always know i'll be right there.
The summer is almost done,
But we don't even care,
Simple rhythms fill the air.

Dozing, breathing,
We are indefinitely tied,
I have your heartstrings on my side.
We are...soaring,
Over existence.
~Looking at the moon.
Our eyes twinkle like the stars,
This night is only ours.

Our lives have just begun,
With our souls like open gates.
Our fire could melt the sun,
Cast the whole world into shade,
And we could fly away,
~There's just three words for us to say.

Category:

People & Blogs

Tags:

• Three
• Words

[ClaraBaaabyx]

i wish i was good at something.

nice job

[wingedorangeumbrella]

hey, not many people are just "good" at something,

it takes lots of practice and passion.

with those two P's you can do pretty much anything.

:D

[porolita22]

OMG you are so good at this! Love the song! And you definitely have the voice for it!

I would give you 10 stars, but there are only 5 :D

[wingedorangeumbrella]

:D

Thanks Pao!

[wingedorangeumbrella]

Dee.

Thank you for your expert advice.

[TheVeganHere]

I have to say I honestly, really enjoyed that.

The melody, the singing and the lyrics.

Thanks for sharing this..........

5 stars!

[wingedorangeumbrella]

Thanks!

:D

[FreeTheMooMoos]

Beautifully written and sung xx

[imasportygirlygirl12]

OMG! That is such a good song. I like the beat and rythym but mayb some of the lyrics can be worked on. Overall great job! <3

[LordTonouchi]

"I am...flying,

Over the mountains."

"We are...soaring,

Over existence."

I think these part of the lyrics have a powerful and refreshing effect in order to introduce the following words, with (timely) middle-high tone.

Your song is so good that I presented the best evaluation to you and added it to my playlists!

Thanks for your upload:)

[wannaplayguitargood]

omg this is amazing! i can't sing for my life, i wish i could...

the lyrics are so good, you wrote the music too?

[Eopyk]

This was awsome :) Your a great song writer :)

All love from me Jasmine :)

[jealousjessie]

amazingly good :]

[MyGoldenGreg]

you sing very sweet...I like holding warm pebbles in my hand too...

[earth00whisper]

wow its cooooooooooooooooooooooooooool­..........why dont u record it in a recording stusio...it can be a hit...............u r amazing

[davfritz]

An angel. Now u wanted constructive critisism....... mmm.... thinking..... looking...........

Ok, I got it- no eye contact with the camera (understandable I guess) and I can see that power outlet (ew). So it was only visual things, but I think your next real step should be more voice volume, but thats just my opinion. Otherwise realy realy cool.

[BOOLSHIT2]

i have an imaginary lover too :) beautiful lyrics, good job girl