I like your vocal variety--varying volume, pace and pitch.
I also appreciate the structure of your speech, going from story to its real life applications and back again.
Your message was positive and you reiterated it so that we would remember.
I found your leg movement and stance were sometimes slightly distracting. It may have been more effective if you had only used a crouching position once, perhaps at the climax of your speech, and added some kin
I like your vocal variety--varying volume, pace and pitch.
I also appreciate the structure of your speech, going from story to its real life applications and back again.
Your message was positive and you reiterated it so that we would remember.
I found your leg movement and stance were sometimes slightly distracting. It may have been more effective if you had only used a crouching position once, perhaps at the climax of your speech, and added some kin
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SoapboxGuru 1 year ago