All right, here I've got a new version with some corrections corresponding to your constructive feedback. Now we've got one note corrected, no more contrametricity, an anacrusis and - hopefully - no more typos... Thank you very much and please go on to perfect it!
Tempo is Andante, about 100BPM. Agreed?
Haven't found any time or mood yet to add some chords (Schattenfeder2000 asked). Any suggestions?
@sagaunleashed Is there one for clarinet?
longshanks0971 2 weeks ago
@longshanks0971 either trombone or horn
sagaunleashed 2 weeks ago
for what instrument is this?
longshanks0971 3 weeks ago
All the notes seem to be correct, but yeah, some rhythm differences as mentioned below. Perhaps because it's a bit rubato, it's harder to count? With notes that feel like they come slightly after the beat because of the singers' delay, breath marks are good for indicating that. I also don't think that the fermata in bar 13 is appropriate.
There's also grouping issues but that's only if you really want to be picky.
Also, what kind of terminology do you use for notation?
littlecat04 1 month ago
9th measure isn't 2/4, it's 4/4 all the way through.
Check the bass drum hit on the first G of the word "roaring", you don't put this into the middle of a measure, but on the downbeat.
Consequently, the G ("heights") in bar 12 is half a note too short.
In bar 19, the C must be a dotted quarter note, the G an 8th note, and the A must be on the downbeat of bar 20.
Bar 21 should be quarter rest, quarter D, quarter F, quarter A, B on the downbeat of 22.
gkgyver 1 month ago