A little too much forced rhyme in some places,and the fake street accent didn't help. I'm not writing this to bash, because that would be pointless. Actually the theme was very nicely put together, and the imagery is explosive, it was just recited horribly,is all.
A little too much forced rhyme in some places,and the fake street accent didn't help. I'm not writing this to bash, because that would be pointless. Actually the theme was very nicely put together, and the imagery is explosive, it was just recited horribly,is all.
tonymwpb 5 years ago
That was great I'm going to watch it 10 times
333TGINN333 5 years ago
I loved this....It was amazing. I liked the beginning too, where you were molesting the mannequin lol.
sadgrl0 5 years ago
this was written, would love to hear a freestyle
freedomtragedy 5 years ago
omg ur so kool
you kinda dress like my brother lol
3rdEyeVision 5 years ago
right on man, nice flow...
pixeline101 5 years ago