[Shiraume] Vocaloid Original Song - Miku & Rin-

My first song with vocaloid. As I can't really talk japanese, I took three haikus from Busson, Onhitusura and an anonymn. Music is mine, i know it's not common music, i tried to give it an oriental taste, I hope someone likes it.

Lyrics:
Shiraume ni
akaru yo bakari to
narinikeri

Yume kaese
karasu no samasu
kiri no tsuki

Jin'yoku no
saigo kokuu
tsukamu nari

Translation:
Lately, nights dawn
white as plum tree flowers

Give back my dream,
crow! Fog swaddles
the moon i see by waking

The last human yearn,
grab the air.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Hatsune
• Miku
• Kagamine
• Rin
• Vocaloid
• Haiku
• Haikai
• Buson
• Ohnitsura
• haikai
• 初音ミク
• しらうめ
• シラウメ
• 鏡音リン
• レン

[darakray9]

nice! its very original

[ExcelLied]

@darakray9 Thanks. xD If you one day want to dance something weird, this song is yours haha.

[eeveegirl5]

I LIKE IT!!! 83 can you post an mp3 for this?

[ExcelLied]

Why not?, where should i Post it?

[Megsaku]

It's odd. But it sounds good anyway. ^^

[ExcelLied]

Thx. I love composing odd things (don't like doing comercial things a lot, only sometimes)

[ExcelLied]

Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. I want to make a video animation, (i have already part of the story board), but that is really going to take some time.

[BlitzDarkfire]

This is pretty good. It sounds like something that took a while to produce. 5 stars ^^

[ExcelLied]

Comment please