electrocuted (trance song)

9th song I made, I hope you guys like it! :)

Category:

Music

Tags:

• FL
• studio
• trance
• song
• electricity
• electrocuted
• dance
• techno
• awesomeness
• awesome
• cool

[nicbaldwin]

that come fulfill at something like 2/3 of it and goes outloud for a short time then go back to background, and a reemixed conclusion that would gather the hearth and body of what ur trying to express here.

[tom1234505]

you are absolutely right, that is why my latest song I have made sounds really good, but I have not uploaded it yet. it is more than 5 minutes long and is alot better than this one. my mom says it is my best one yet. (in fact, my latest song makes this one sound like childs play.) do you want me to send you a P.M. when I upload it to youtube? thank you for your comments and your honesty,

Tom

[nicbaldwin]

id be honored tom :)

i do appreciate being usefull to artist such as u :P

[tom1234505]

cool, just check out my channel and click on " a great techno/trance song."

Thank you!

Tom

[nicbaldwin]

sry for the way iexpress mysefl im not english but french. i c image in music. and what i can tell u is that ur missing something

a background beat from the heart

[nicbaldwin]

id say this song is pretty good u have talent as a composer but it do miss some sort Of conclusion

or a big BOUM ! in the middle something like in a metal tune a solo of some sort

its like i c a great body but with no heart .

[nicbaldwin]

u are good

what could i say mmm,,, im not good at this .