Ultimatum Episode 0: Prologue Part 2

Part 2
Check out the Vimeo version here:
http://www.vimeo.com/5408727/
In the year 2568 Earth has dramatically changed. North America has become a unified country, where all is peaceful and a newly elected President has promised change for the better. But in the shadows a Rebel Regime has formed and has planned to take action against the government they see facist. In two years North America's morale is at an all time low as Rebels invade towns and cities with ease. In the middle of the fray is Joseph "Joe" Jackson, a happy go lucky teen and thinks the world is perfect. But Joe is soon going to realize that the world is not as he thinks.
Special Thanks to our Voice Actors:
Longshotbrit1993
Itsnoturday
Markkoh
Zac117

Scene Guide
Canada Sucks... What It DOES!
0:00-2:00
Ryan IS A Last Name, It's Irish!
2:01-2:34
UAV RECON IS ONLINE!
2:35-3:39
Rebel General
3:40-4:09
Are Rebels Retarded?
4:10-5:40
Dramatic Irony
5:41-5:57
Credits... As If You Care...
5:58-7:15

honors
#90 - Top Rated (Today) - Film & Animation - Canada

Category:

Film & Animation

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• Halo Comabt Evolved
• Machinima
• Action
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• The Rantings of EVA
• Infrared
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• Weezer
• Saving Private Ryan

[Lrules0202]

it is really good itsthe voices that are ruining it but don't worry it is still good 8/10

[Phoenix6424]

Work on your voices. Try to cut down on the hard "s" sounds. Try positioning your mike a bit farther away. Also, make your characters' voices a bit more distinct. Give each of them they're own accent and speech quirks. One final thing: if you're talking and you're trying to be heard over gunfire, don't be afraid to shout and then reduce the gunfire SFX. Overall, I like it so far and will give it a bit of time to develop. And Jackson's voice needs to drop the lisp. It really ruins the character.

[NarutoDude134]

The plot is great but the voice acting could be a little beter, also you need to sync the shots more but overall it was good. 7/10

[SILENTHAWX]

this is a very good plot for machinima however u could improve the music and u could use a little comedy obut otherwise awesome!

[guitarherofan1232]

this is a brilliant plot and could be a brilliant movie... i will give it a 9/10 because of the audio lag and machine gun sound overpowering the speech you didn't get a 10/10 but could be solved

[zacnumber00001]

I think the biggest issue is audio, the volume is a bit off on a few parts, voice acting could use work, I can't distinguish the jokes from the serious action. Other than that it's coming along pretty well.

I should get my lines in within this week,

Zac 117

[eblade9]

no idea but all i know the voice acting is due at the end of the month

[Allen1342]

Whens the next one going to be finished? its a good plot so far just a little problem with the voice acting 5/5

[ForerunnerLuke]

I would have to agree with these guys here.

When you're talking, do you have a lisp or happen to bite your tongue or something? Also, hearing voices is difficult over loud SFX such as machine gun bullets.

Also, you should always make sure that the Background SFX of the level are in-sync and don't turn off even when people are talking, e.g. 2:22

4/5.

[ambeatch]

i just dont know guys. it wusnt all that well don. the voice acting neaded work, the guns are not in sync with there sounds. you guys need to drop the joks and stick with makeing it awsom :)  on the bright side the music and the camra wus well don. and the fact that you guys are canadians is cool to :)