Happiness of Marionette [English Vocal]

It's been a while since I really tried singing something and even longer since I've had the confidence to sing as strongly as I like (I'm very self-conscious when singing in front of people IRL and it's hard when you room with 5 other people at school). But I'm home for 3 months now. And in those 3 months I'm going to try and sing something every week. By the end of the 3 months I hope to have improved some.

So please give helpful advice! I'm no professional singer and don't plan to be but this is something I'd like to improve on anyway.

As for this song, I can hear various places near the ends of the choruses where I begin to waver and go flat. Need to fix that Cx

Song Download: http://www.fileden.com/files/2009/9/23/2583239//HappinessofMarionetteVocalEng...

Song: Happiness of Marionette
Game: Umineko no Naku Koro ni
Composer: Dai
Original Vocal: nayuta
English lyrics: Finalized version (here) by Kim B.
English singing: Kim B.

Lyrics:

I'll deliver it to you;
A dream which makes you happy
To the you who's still crying;
Blow away your tears

Once again magic walks free
And I will be found
You're that kind of person
who looks up towards the blue sky

The sky collapsed with you on that day back in the fall
All those things you'd like to do, went and hit the wall
The sky on that day...
Turned black as charcoal
Like in the darkness,
Every day will get torn up
Is it something trivial?
Something doesn't add up
To this collapsing desire that is still here in me

I'll deliver it to you;
A dream which makes you happy
To the you who's still crying;
Blow away your tears

Once again magic walks free
And I will be found
You're that kind of person
who looks up towards the blue sky

(Can you see me? From your standpoint? Let's go fly with the seagulls...)

I'll deliver it to you;
A dream which makes you happy
To the you who's still crying;
Blow away your tears

Once again magic walks free
And I will be found
You're that kind of person
who looks up towards the blue sky

_____

Disclaimer: It's a FANdub. Not for profit. Go buy the Umineko game like I did and support the awesome creators and composers :D

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• umineko
• no
• naku
• koro
• ni
• happiness
• of
• marionette
• vocal
• fandub
• english

[RueChanDark]

nice voice but you have to practice a little more. Remember practice makes the master. check for the voice intensity and the afination

[Destler]

@RueChanDark This was made over a year ago. I have improved since then C:

[amazake]

for lyrics, go to

asashikka.ishtera.net/wp/?p=86­2

[Destler]

@amazake Atashi has a better translation. Even says so on that site. And I adapted these lyrics from Atashi I believe C:

[Fedeex3]

Woah, I love this fandub :D And your voice is nice too.

Though, I recommend you to lower the volume of the music, because sometimes your voice cannot be heard as well as it could. That's a shame, because by what I just listened, it is a wonderful voice ^^

[Destler]

@Fedeex3 At the time I was limited to using on Garageband and couldn't get a happy medium between the vocals and music with the program. I also think at the time I didn't realize doubling up the vocals in the program would make them louder... Cx;

I've been working on a newer version of this fandub though so I'll definitely have the vocals be a bit more prominent than in this one ;D

And thank you very much! ^^

[MamitoLeduran]

No ones perfect~ so why practice if its impossibru to be perfect?

So no worries dude

[Kinzougreat]

Great job! Wow.

[Fedeex3]

@Destler Oh, really? Then, I'll be looking forward to listening to it! I would be pleased if you tell me when you publish another version of this fandub :D

[vgrecords]

Nice n.n

Check this out

watch?v=_va6QPQwTHY