Desolation Gas Station Blues
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This is great. What a brilliant subject for a poem--this little space of time given life in your writing of it. Glad you will be doing more poems soon! I'll hold you to it. :o)
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Good to hear you again! Faved!
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Super title! So, Pete writes the blues. Cool!
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Great rhythm. I read the words first and then watched the vid. I expected to see you with a guitar singing the words. Nice to see you back.
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Excellent poem.
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I had serious desolation gas station blues back in the day. I too actually worked there once upon a time ago. Not good. But this poem is good.
Matter of fact, this piece was not bad at all...can relate completely.
Nice work.
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I can hear the blues riffs...
You should set this to music.
myrnaukelele 1 year ago
@myrnaukelele
Yes, I was trying to imagine this poem as a blues but I lack the skill to transfer a blues rhythm into poetry.
If you would like to take the poem and rearrange it, as you please, to fit a twelve bar blues, please be my guest.
It would be an honour to collaborate with a musician ...'cause all poets love musicians.
nordicsky 1 year ago