Translucence

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The piece is written by me. This isn't meant to be a debate on race, sexual orientation or agism. So please, if you want to debate it, find a channel that does that....
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[rooftopeagle]

The poem isn't meant to be a debate however it is a clear political statement...sort of like everything...no one can put something out without an agenda...it's not humanly possible.

On the flip side, I like it :)

[thelitcorner]

It most certainly does have an agenda. It's not a debate because it doesn't show both sides or care to.... It's about one love, one experience, one mind-bending, life altering thought.... It's about putting myself in someone else's shoes. And it's about how I (and in this context, only what I believe matters) believe that love is love is love.... as long as it's informed and consensual, I don't believe in binding it to tradition.

[chickwithfootieson]

hmm.... this is an interesting poem but i need to see this written down to comment on it.

for me, verbal poetry needs a certain edge.... the way you say words are just as important as the words himself.... things like how you are stressing words too much, and the actual staccato-like sounds you make with your words put it off for me... sorry

BTW, sorry if I was a bit harsh but i just was editing my friends Music EP and we are trying to make it perfect... still in that mode i suppose : 3 jana!

[thelitcorner]

There is plenty to be said about the way poetry should be written, or shouldn't be. How it should be read or shouldn't. But when all is said and done, all that matters is that it's yours. When I hear this I know that the person it was written in memory of is captured... More importantly, the subject of whether gender matters I felt was properly addressed here.

And poetry is not music. Not even when read. There is a difference, and should be.

[dsmoya31410]

I did not get the author of the poet. Is it you, Kicesie?

[thelitcorner]

Yes, I wrote this.

[sulli5577]

oh my goodness girl, breathtaking. If only i could write something like this. I listened to this about 5 times, it really touched me...please keep sharing your beautiful work

I think you are an amazing person!

[minec123]

wow loved it...but lol yes,yes Herbal essence shampoo couldn't help but laugh

[jdfox1]

Beautiful words...very nice. Thanks for sharing. :)

[JustForTheDead]

This was beautiful. Wow.

[CantCopeWontCope]

ballard reference?

[scorpion27101987]

Yup,i remember them too... they've gotten as far as eastern Europe ... at a first glance,the poem seems to be exactly what it seems to be,but (mostly) unfortunately (/although there are good surprises from life too,my balance is tilted strongly towards the negative side of the axis :-( /) life teaches us time and again that many things are far more than meets the eye,so i'll have to sleep on it to get a more accurate impression... ,but i like it.

[scorpion27101987]

rrjpfsmjp ... you' old?

I mean ,i noticed your comments seep intelligence but you also display an uncharacteristic open-mindness for an old person (if you indeed are old) that's why i didn't imagine...(by the way,i noticed you answered one of my comments and i was about to send you a reply but i had some problems and the message got lost in translation...a nicer way of saying how dumb i was for not keeping backups...it was a rather large reply,meant to impress you :P gonna send you another,soon)