Something More - original song

Can you hear me yell at the top of my lungs.
Breath it in, breath it all in, till I suffocate on your poison.
Dont look me in the eyes, could I make you feel something
real for once in your life?

Break my soul into a thousands fragments
Of pain and love tangled into one.
Hold my hand as Im sinking fast,
Into your dark and tainted oblivion.

We could be something beautiful.
We could have it all.

I watch helplessly as you die hopelessly
Hands forever tied behind my back.
More than two worlds beating fast.
At the speed of their own eyes.

We could be
Beautiful
We could be
Something more

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• midnightfirefly14

[vinisage]

truly amazing. very good(great song). i wish you could hear this electric piece i put over it. very minor and diminished. i tell ya you have a great song there. record it if you haven't all ready.

[midnightfirefly14]

vinisage, I'd love to hear the piece you've added to my song. Do you have it recorded?

[rileyrabbit]

I cannot believe you do not think you are a musician, you totally are!! This song as well as the others you have up clearly show my point =]

Great song I love it!!! What inspired you to write it?

[midnightfirefly14]

the state of humanity inspired this song...a constant battle of pain and beauty. Thank you for your kind comments rileyrabbit...it means so much to me

[glitterxdior]

for lyrics with promises of power, it sort of seems like your voice is a bit too soft in this song. that's just my opinion, but i still love it !

[midnightfirefly14]

yeah I have a really soft voice :) thanks for stopping by glitterxdior

[kitzyimon]

Wow, beautiful song. You have a great future with music. Keep up the original song writing, love to hear more.

[ageofguitarz]

that was good

[carlellement]

You are getting really good... Happy new year and keep up the great sounding tunes =)

[tumnusLOVE]

you are so good. keep up the wonderful work. you have a beautiful voice.

[vinisage]

see what i can do

[rileyrabbit]

That's deep, it's wonderful song.

You're welcome =]

I can relate to most of the songs you have written, I say the same about your music.

[jojomize]

Amazing voice as usual...=) Just wondering if you've thought about any Owl CIty covers...but of course keep working on your own great music!

[Mimaten2]

very cute =)