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Uploaded by on Mar 24, 2010

Novel Writing adding details assignment with participles, absolutes, and appositives

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  • Excellent. Gloria entered the room on the arm of General Bonaparte, her green velvet gown rustling,her jewels twinkling in the reflected light of the chandelier, and whispering to her escort, to the dark-haired emperor of all of France, "Which one is Josephine?"

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  • (Gloria entered the room. She was anxiously urging for excitement and everyone knew it. Her friends were not present but she could not resist the opportunity to mingle with the elites of society even if they would not welcome her with open arms.) How was that?

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