Lost Fool

A song i'm playing with. Sorry about the sound and the break in my voice near the end. Got a bit of a cold and i'm recording on a headset mic. Oh to have money and buy proper equipment. Let me know what you think.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Alistair
• Whitehead
• Lost
• fool
• acoustic
• alternative
• country
• jazz
• rock
• soul
• unsigned
• bumblebees
• bananarama
• cheese
• factory

[paradiseheaven]

i'm the first to comment..woohoo..

as far as the critiques go,...that song was pretty long..the tune was not bad..but i couldn't really get the lyrics..but good job..overall

[AlistairWhitehead]

Yeh your right about the length. I've got to cut it down and tune it up. Make it run a bit smoother. Thanks for the wicked comment!

[BonBonxoxox]

Oops, It's winebible not wine bible.

[BonBonxoxox]

Hey Alistair, I heard of few of your songs. Not bad. Your style reminds me of one of my favorite bands. I think you might like these guys. Their name is "Wine bible". They

are NOT christian as the name implies and they're fairly obscure. Which makes them all the dearer. A good song to check out is "Judas".

[Sepharon20]

Good job! ^^ Keep them comming, I like the high tune on the guitar!

Btw give me one of those balloons :D

[jesse3sv]

actually, i think it's one of your best songs..it could be better if the rythm would change a bit during the 6' ....

[4thesakeofit]

I want to learn to play guitar that well :)

Nice vid!

[Amydali86]

I couldn't hear the lyrics really well...

[mattbellamymate]

yeah bit long but otherwise super!

[SiouxPianist]

Kewl voice!

[TalashkaKakashka007]

not bad.you have a good voice.