Kobina Wright - Fences

This monologue is taken from August Wilson's stage play "Fences." This is Rose's response to her husband, Troy, after he tells her he's been seeing another woman because she makes him feel like a new man, like he hasn't been "standing in the same place for 17 years."

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• performing
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• fences
• August
• Wilson
• drama

[Langcreator]

great job great emotion you my hero mom

[kaleelee2309]

@sylerk I can send it to you if you want...

[sylerk]

WHERE DID YOU GET THE WORDS TO THE MONOLOGUE AT ?

[misskindy]

its 18 years. and your hand motions and head twisting made me think this is the "hood" Rose! not to be mean. i liked your tone however, not too soft or too loud. i liked the firmness of your voice but just cool it down with the head twisitng and hand motions! its very distracting! let the motions happen naturally. and breath! some of the motions are not flowing very well. really define what you are trying to get from the other character.

[biggie74259631087202]

18 years of my life

[asheltosh]

I need you to breathe through your speech. I want to feel you actually process and think about every word before you say it. Good start! :)

[jocelyn0000]

You started at the highest peak of the monologue. So therefore there was nowhere else to go you know? You have some lovely moments. Specially the seed and planting it watching it grow. was a great moment. However some of the moments where lost. It wasn't clear what your intensions were for your character. What were you trying to get from the other character? Good luck and keep working! <3

[fzkny]

You've done a wonderful job!

[smtherka]

LOL, even though this don't look like ROSE, you seemed so real the way you were talking lmao . cute :)

[POETSENT]

It was a little pitchy . But between your mono I could hear the emotion rather then just seeing it.Good. Reason good actors can perform to a blind man and still affect the audience. It was not exactly like I thought Rose would be portrayed, but you made it you own. Good job keep going

[Bloorain82]

Great job!