"Twist Of Fate"... possible New Serie

SOOO... this is like a preface or pilot? ..well i was watching "Transformers" when i thought of this, and of course Jemi...and dont worry is not like the movie..it just cross in my mind, it has no robots.. but maybe a few name from the movie will appear..and you have to tell me if you want to read more of this... like i said is a pilot...at the i have questions if i have minim. 3 comments responding ill comtinue IF you want.. oh did i mention is Jemi. Now to the story.

Agatha keeps running insecure if she will find her guardian again in the darkness of the night, and in the middle of the forest that cant let her run as fast as she wishes, away, away from the people that she cant seem to get rid off...she stops her tracks hiding in the bushes, only thing in her around that can work as a shield to dissapierd, in silence try to hear how far THEY are..tears threating to fall down form her big eyes in fear, she gasps and covers with her hands the sound at the view of one of THEM, searching for her frenetically, trying to catch her to any cost. She close her eyes wishing to be back to that same morning when her guarding wake her up with a small birthday cake for her 9 years old and a small box with a pink bow, the words of "happy Birthday" kept ringing in her mind when a hand touch her shoulders making her jump, starlet and afraid to look back and see the end for the 3th time in her short years.

???: (covers agathas mouth and smile) shhh, be quiet, they left, but we need to wait Thia.


Thia was her Nickname her guardian gave her the first time they met, 3 years ago, when she was release from the orphanage, the name Thia was different, just like her and somehow it help too... she knows her life is very different from any other kid of her age, and sometimes she had to make decisions to hard to handle but she had to or every one she loved wouldnt be saved from THEM, who already killed her adoptive parents the same night she was adopted.

Agatha nods and hugs at her guardian asking for protection and love, the 2 things she needed the most. After 30 minutes sure THEY left the place both start to walk trying to find a way to leave the unknown place after 30 km walking the found a road leading them to a gas station with a big sign "BOBBY B", Agatha laugh at the sound of the name, she liked it so much she try to say the words continuesly non stop, the guardian didnt want to interrupt her because it will help her to forget what happened at least until happen again, when they got to the door of the G.S., Agatha stop.

???: (Takes agatha in its arms and looks at her) we're safe here, come on (knocks on the door with its free hand)

Agatha trust in her guardian, they have learned to believe in each other. they have lived the same destiny over and over again, and now looking for a solution hard to find, maybe a twist of fate can bring them some peace once again.


????: HELLO!!!? CAN SOMEONE HELP US!?!
????: (turns the lights on from the store and looks outside approaching to the door) hi, what do you want?
????: we need a place to stay, please, just for the night..
????: ( open the door and looks them then at Agatha)
Agatha: (looks into his eyes,and hers turn black for a second then to normal)
????: (blinks a couple of times and smile at them)come in, i dont have a room for you but i have a sofa you can use.
Agatha: (smile) is your name "BOBBY B"?
????: BObby B in person young lady (smile) and yours?
Agatha: (giggles) mine is Agatha and ---
????: (interrupts her) im .......

Pilots ending.

1..do you want more?
2.. if you do... who is Agatha's Guardian? 2 options for this ahaha

A) Demi
B) Joe

hope you comment thanks

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Twist
• of
• Fate
• Jemi

[EcilaCrown]

@KROLINESIGN2 actually I dont kno the movie that inspired u.. so i kinda ahave no idea XD

cuz i dont kno the actual movie... so ima go for "Joe" cuz everyone above is votin for Demi XDDD

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[cheerxgirl95]

Love it n I think Demi should be the guardian

[tinicupcake]

sounds good so far!!!

[EcilaCrown]

love the idea =)

u should go for it ;)

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