FanFic Critic Episode 167: "Kit vs. Kat"

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Uploaded by on Jan 28, 2012

*SORRY THIS WAS LATE! My work schedule made it impossible for me to get it out on time. Also, Blip refused to distribute this to YouTube. So, I had to manually upload it.*

The FanFic Critic's luck has run out...she has to read a mess of a fanfic for today's review. JOY!

Story URL:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5137587/1/bKit_b_bvs_b_bKat_b

***EDIT: And, yes, I am aware of the "f*** ups" in this episode.

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  • Ugh. Just hearing you read this made my brain hurt. What a lazy author! I mean, imagine someone talking like this in real life!

    "Hello, how are?"

    "I am. How are?"

    Sounds pretty dumb.

  • @ChiptheBlackMage Yeah, that would sound rather dumb if someone spoke like that in real life. Reading a story out loud is one of the best methods in finding mistakes, especially glaring ones like that.

  • I've just started watching your reviews.

    I thought this one would be about chocolate. I was wrong.

  • @AdorableWolfTengu ...ah, I see..."kit-kat bar".

  • I haven't watched the entire video, but I just want to point out that I think Kid vs Kat is great! Interesting enough, I actually had my own spec script of the series read and critiqued by one of the series' story editors.

  • @ThatFellowCoat Cool!

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  • @ChiptheBlackMage Hello, how are doing? I am, how about? That is!

    ...I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself there. :P

  • @moukidelmar Never thought of it that way, but yes

    The only differences I can think of is Kid vs. Kat isn't as awesome as invader Zim

    And Kat never speaks

  • Good lord I got so confused in this mess. Maybe it's because I didn't have any prior knowledge of the show but I don't know if even that would have saved it. I'm sorry you had to sit through that, hopefully this week you have a better fanfic to read.

  • @MsPerryRocks It's okay. You sent me a PM on ff.net, right? If so, I replied.

  • @FanFicCritic Gah, I hate comment I posted. Sorry about that ^^;

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