FanFic Critic Episode 167: "Kit vs. Kat"
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@ChiptheBlackMage Hello, how are doing? I am, how about? That is!
...I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself there. :P
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@moukidelmar Never thought of it that way, but yes
The only differences I can think of is Kid vs. Kat isn't as awesome as invader Zim
And Kat never speaks
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Good lord I got so confused in this mess. Maybe it's because I didn't have any prior knowledge of the show but I don't know if even that would have saved it. I'm sorry you had to sit through that, hopefully this week you have a better fanfic to read.
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@MsPerryRocks It's okay. You sent me a PM on ff.net, right? If so, I replied.
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@FanFicCritic Gah, I hate comment I posted. Sorry about that ^^;
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Ugh. Just hearing you read this made my brain hurt. What a lazy author! I mean, imagine someone talking like this in real life!
"Hello, how are?"
"I am. How are?"
Sounds pretty dumb.
ChiptheBlackMage 1 week ago
@ChiptheBlackMage Yeah, that would sound rather dumb if someone spoke like that in real life. Reading a story out loud is one of the best methods in finding mistakes, especially glaring ones like that.
FanFicCritic 1 week ago
I've just started watching your reviews.
I thought this one would be about chocolate. I was wrong.
AdorableWolfTengu 1 week ago
@AdorableWolfTengu ...ah, I see..."kit-kat bar".
FanFicCritic 1 week ago
I haven't watched the entire video, but I just want to point out that I think Kid vs Kat is great! Interesting enough, I actually had my own spec script of the series read and critiqued by one of the series' story editors.
ThatFellowCoat 1 month ago
@ThatFellowCoat Cool!
FanFicCritic 1 month ago