"Entranced"

*Click More to see lyrics etc" Hey everyone, this poem is called Entranced, and is set to a lovely song by Evanescence "October", and images. Please see all of my other vids, as I would love your constructive comments to help me have your opinions for a book I am comprising of poems to publish. Please do not claim my work for yourselves, but feel free to pass on links to my channel and vids to ur friends :) Thank you for watching!

Lyrics:
Come away with me my love, into the place you have dared not to dream, the memory so once cherished long ago, still alive with passion locked inside. Why must it be hidden away, yes for tis a treasure not to be squandered away to strangers, but as precious pearls, rarest of finds, kept forever pure. For this is my desire, yes it is you, a secret passion to lay me down at night and awaken me in the dawn. Carrying me through bittersweet moments to be had, of oneness and realness, a glimmer of flame constantly burning inside for the other, is ours. Hide from me not, you need no fear or doubt; you are safe with me, place yourself in my hands and see what fashioned they may lay, to shine as gold and be purified as diamonds. For diamonds too once were hidden deep within coal, their beauty eluding even the cautious of eyes, until time, and love, chipped away at this hard core, revealing its beauty inside. And my breath was simply taken away from me, stolen as if by thief in the shadows, you overcame me and I was swept away. Never from that time forward to belong to myself, for all that I am became yours, and I was entranced. Caught in your splendor I was awestruck and desired you even more, to give more of myself to you. Yet my mind pushes against it, for how many impersonating gems have also directed my gaze in hopes of something real, only to have it revealed as nothing of worth. But I cannot help myself. There is something in you that speaks to me clearly as voice, beckons to me from my cowardice and want, to come to you and hide away in your brilliance. Flawless you are to me, you could do no wrong, for through bad and good I would stand beside you always, in cherish and in warmth, to hold you through the tears and laugh with you through the joys, tis this not love? Dare we even speak it, for it is so often a misused word, but is it not what is happening right before our eyes? Though it may not be spoken I see it in all you say and do towards me, and I smile at you as if to say, yes I know and tis with me as well. A knowing gaze, I catch in the lights of your eyes, and you are so beautiful I cannot turn away, and instead bury myself deeper in you, for there I see myself, and all we have, all to come. To pleasure you in ways you never thought possible, to take you to the brink and catch you as you fall only to travel to heights once more, yes I would fall with you. For I believe I already have fallen, and it is you that has caught me in your grasp, and I am limp and trusting, eyes closed and lips to the heaven in hopes of meeting yours there, and so it is. As no one knows what days may come, I do know tis with you is the only place I long to be, nothing else matters. The world could crumble around our feet and as I would have you to cling to, I would fear nothing, for you complete me, and are my everything. In you I find all that I dream of becoming, and all that I desire not, wrapped up in lovely strands of gold, yes three for tis not easily broken. I am yours alone, in this life of love and dance, for you and I side by side, forever in the other entranced, and always be.
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[richardmckay888]

hey its diesel i loved this video and the story that went with it reminds me of a bad time in my life was a really good vid A+++++

[poeticone2812009]

I am so happy it touched you diesel, really... and thank you so much for your comment!

[davesnsanity]

i am literally balling after watching this video. seeing this poem written out would probably steer me away from reading it, but the beautiful, moving music and occasional pictures held my attention. i've never read a poem that so accurately describes the feeling of being undeniably, irrevocably in love.

[poeticone2812009]

I am so humbled by your comment daves, and am honoured these words touched the depths of you. Thank you for such a beautiful reply, and for watching.

[sarahbush68]

this is so beautiful.

[poeticone2812009]

Thank you Sarah, the act of falling in love can be beautiful, and that's what this is about, so hard to capture in words but I hope I came close. :) Thanks for watching!

[LilMsPromiseBreaker]

This video popped up even though it had NOTHING to do with what I was searching. But I love this! It nearly made me cry! Kudos!

[mnmonkey101406]

Always my favorite. This song always touches my soul.

[poeticone2812009]

So happy you liked it! thanks for watching!

[adhamlavidaloca]

lovely clip

regards