Xerox Candybar

Cut paper assignment for intro to Animation at RISD. Kind of boring because we had some strict guidelines for what was supposed to go on in the project. Yes, that's Richard Brautigan's actual voice, not a computer. First lip sync, first walk cycle, first first first.

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Film & Animation

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• Richard
• Brautigan
• cut
• paper
• xerox
• candybar
• poetry
• django
• reinhardt

[lifezkind]

sorry, but no

[Yarrowstalks]

any constructive criticism?

[StephenHalloran]

I like it- but I don't like to explosion--- being a avid reader of Brautigan--- I think of him as the most gentle of poets... I think it would better if nothing happens... nothing can be a real cool...also... I don't like her neck opening up and sharing words towards the end--- I think that that has a Pez like quality but it is not with the spirit of Brautigan---- if you changed both of those things I would love it!

[MaribelSantoyo]

Ok. this is sorta fu##$. I see where you're going with the gun shot.

[rocketqueenz]

i think brautigan would love love this

and laugh a bit

[rocketqueenz]

amazing.

[AliceNread]

It was great. It is too bad his poems are so short.

[gnomelover]

I have to agree. could you explain your reasoning for that image?

[lifezkind]

i appreciate the recording of Brautigan reciting the poem and the graphics are done well, but the image of what appears to be his head blowing up is just too disturbing considering the way he died. i'm also not sure what such an explosion has to do with the poem.

[Stumbleine689]

I find this to be alittle creepy. But still pretty sweet.