look&see (original)

My very first original song posted on YouTube :)! This isn't the very first song I've ever written, but I wrote this in 10 minutes today and was excited to record, so enjoy!

look&see lyrics:

Verse 1
Take a little look closer at my heart
At my heart

Take a little look closer at my heart
At my heart

Chorus 1:
Do you see? (do you see?)
Do you see? (do you see?)
Do you see how blind you are?

Verse 2:
Take a little look closer at your heart
At your heart

Take a little look closer at your heart
At your heart

Chorus 2:
Can I see? (can I see?)
Can I see? (can I see?)
Can I see how blind I am?

It's very simple, but I've learned that songs that you connect with don't always have to be complicated. Sometimes it's the way things are simply put :).

Category:

Music

Tags:

• look&see
• acoustic
• ohsweetanna
• guitar
• girl
• first
• original

[edwinsgeneration]

I really like it. this song totally has potential as is for liek professional recording I totally get what you're saying on it poured out and songs dont always need too many words to explain just one message!!! :)

[ohsweetanna]

You are so sweet Edwino! Thanks for your support :).

[jimwesig]

You definately have a beautiful voice.Great song,but I think you could fit more lyrics in to this song so that it would really depict the the reality of ones blindness to someones love.

[ohsweetanna]

Thanks for watching and commenting, and for your suggestion! This really just poured out of me today, which has never really happened before, each song has a mind of its own. For now, I feel that it's complete, but who knows, songwriting is always a work in progress! Thanks again!

[dannyab3]

aaww edwin your soo nice ahahah

[dannyab3]

wow your hot 5 stars

[briantfenton]

very nice job...you are really talented........B

[forevernonexistant]

r u italian?

[Csifresk]

toy=)