Song was written for the C.F. Martin Guitar Co. As part of this contest, participants were required to write an original song using the word LIFESPAN (named after their newer long life strings) in the song. Rather than write a standard, I approached it in my head as a song that might be ideal as perhaps the background music to a commercial for the strings. Hope ya like it. If so, you can vote for me at http://lifespan.venturaassociates.net/gallerydetails.php?vid=103
LIFESPAN "COMMERCIAL SONG"
I pick you up round 6 o'clock
We gotta move no time to stop
We've got miles to travel now before we get to play
Packed up in this SUV
Got my guitar, it's you and me
Tonite will find out if it's true just what I've heard 'em say...
Ya got rhythm, ya got blues and there's no way I could lose...so I won't stray..
I GOT LIFESPANS under my hands and ya feel so good to me, and your all I ever need
ITS ALL THE REASON
my sound is pleasin' to me and all my fans wana thank you, cuz your my LIFESPANS
It seems that you've been all wound up
But they're pourin' money in my cup
I'll play ya through if you sing for me, we'll take it day by day
You're doin' great, a friend to me
We're 3 weeks in and I can't believe
The future, well it still looks bright as I put you on display
You've really pulled right through, each note of this is true....I'm glad to say....
I GOT LIFESPANS under my hands and ya feel so good to me, and your all I ever need
ITS ALL THE REASON
my sound is pleasin'... to me and all my fans wana thank you, cuz your my LIFESPANS
A month went by and you'd paid your dues
Here I am about to choose
Replacing you ain't easy, but I know just what to do.....
I'LL TAKE THOSE LIFESPANS
By your right hand
Sir, I've put them to the test and they are the very best
AND THERE'S A REASON
They sound so pleasin', you'll truly understand when they're wrapped up in your hands...
You got LIFESPANS
© 2012 Dale Toth
Abner, Thanks. I appreciate that. Yeah, ideally wouldn't be my topic for a song, however I kind of figured most would end up writing more about life or love based on havin' to use "LIFESPAN" in the tune, so with that I opted to go the opposite way and approach it more as a song for a potential commercial. Either way, glad ya took time out to listen.
soulvox1 1 month ago
Kevin,
Thanks so much, appreciate your support.
Dale
soulvox1 1 month ago