"Harvey's Immaculate Donut" - Original Short Written and Directed by Jacob Pauwels
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I disagree, I think that audio is the difference between a boring movie that you can sit through and a boring movie I cannot.
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Excellently done. Aside from a few audio issues it seemed solid enough. I personally know Mr. Turpen and can say that this was well played. (He is by far one of the least snoody people I know.) Take this experience as a learned one, audio can be the difference between excellence and mediocrity.
4/5
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looks pretty awesome.
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Creative ending credits.
Poor audio, I can hear the blips everytime there is an audio track change. It sounds at time that you turned up the audio gain to a point where there was way to much hissing. Some of the dialogue was poorly written mainly "waitress, I think I will partake in a doughnut".
It looks like you slowed down the falling coffee mug in post, when you should have recorded at a higher frame rate.
The bedroom set up seemed setup and not like he actually lived there.
2/5 sry
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This was a lot of fun! Way to go, Jacob! You and your team did a great job.
Excellent ending; it took me by surprise.
Also, your music choices were fantastic.
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Nice job guys!
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woo! I dig it. I think it turned out great. I like the added story parts too.
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Awesome man, it turned out great. It was awesome working with you.
Good work, Jake, turned out great. Like the ending credits
dragonbreath87X 2 years ago 5
Hah! I love the end credits, very cute. Good job.
EllyThePhilosopher 2 years ago 5