I just got back from the link and from what I read (All of the SM/DBZ), I think its ok.
I my self am more into funny stuff and havent seen alot of it so far, so I don't think I can really give good fair critisisom for those storys. But I will say honestly I think you can inprove if you work hard on it. (Wow real origanality me!)
ummm i cant leave comments on your channel ... not sure why but yeah that sucks can only post on individual videos ... im subscribed so not sure why this is ...
see if she can critique mine, id love some reviews from someone whos not a fan of my work
Simgr101 2 weeks ago
Well as long as it's not TrunksXPan Fanfics, i'll read it.
I'm getting sick of those.
ImmaGTBaby 1 month ago
I just got back from the link and from what I read (All of the SM/DBZ), I think its ok.
I my self am more into funny stuff and havent seen alot of it so far, so I don't think I can really give good fair critisisom for those storys. But I will say honestly I think you can inprove if you work hard on it. (Wow real origanality me!)
MrGamernova 1 month ago
ummm i cant leave comments on your channel ... not sure why but yeah that sucks can only post on individual videos ... im subscribed so not sure why this is ...
Seanerrr 1 month ago
@jordarr4332 who says they are good plot wise?
blackosw22 1 month ago
@SkyMaro how do you explain drandosk and vegito1089
jordarr4332 1 month ago