ok first off you tuning on the guitar is off the vocals are out of your range. Overall your not good. im sorry but you need alot of work. i honestly dont know if everyone else who left a comment saying that this is good must be tone def and also you arent a screamer so dont try. and before you add vocals you should try and master the guitar first
i thought it was bad tbh, you kept getting loud on 1 word then quiet on the next, the volume was all over the place. Vocals weren't that smooth, kept dipping in and out of tone. Haven't got to the screaming yet.
In all honesty I liked the other one more, seeing as how at the chorus of this one, you didn't strum enough... It's alot of downstrumming.... Listen to the song closely, and you'll se what I'm tlaking about...
Lol! -_-
MyTyphlosion 5 months ago
i'm dying laughing
matchbox202006 10 months ago
ok first off you tuning on the guitar is off the vocals are out of your range. Overall your not good. im sorry but you need alot of work. i honestly dont know if everyone else who left a comment saying that this is good must be tone def and also you arent a screamer so dont try. and before you add vocals you should try and master the guitar first
clloyd921 1 year ago 2
i thought it was bad tbh, you kept getting loud on 1 word then quiet on the next, the volume was all over the place. Vocals weren't that smooth, kept dipping in and out of tone. Haven't got to the screaming yet.
cotch85 2 years ago
sounds good. the vocals and good but the screaming could use some work. i agree with antisaint, try holding the sream a little bit longer
sammy15850 3 years ago
ummm hold that scream longer
Antisaint46 3 years ago
In all honesty I liked the other one more, seeing as how at the chorus of this one, you didn't strum enough... It's alot of downstrumming.... Listen to the song closely, and you'll se what I'm tlaking about...
Not bad vocals though.
hellishborn 3 years ago
WUSS, actually this ain't bad... if you had some sweet background and stuff.
nikbrick1 4 years ago
sex?
mash36 4 years ago
cool dude
RyanX1020 4 years ago