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This is pretty good, but I think it could be better. Having a breakdown in every prechorus kinda takes away from the idea of the breakdown as a tempo shift, if you save it for the empty section before the last chorus itd be way better. And then, after that breakdown, bring in a giant section of double bass 16ths and harmonized guitars. That way youll have that huge final culmination and itll sound epic. Just some thoughts.
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Really good, but two things. 1 the vocals should be a bit louder. 2 it need a bass line. Add that in and this will be perfect
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im pretty sure i got hard by this!!! what tuning u using?
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this is freakin awesome, Jalon!!! i LUV it!!!
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Attention: I have created a new YouTube Channel under the name jalonhallmusic. I will soon be posting re-recorded and mastered versions of all of my music... covers and original material and it will have a much better sound and mix quality. Check it soon... thanks!
Jalon
jalonhall 6 months ago
Thank you for the feedback! I will be fully re-recording my tracks very soon... complete with bass and better mixing. Please Inbox me if you or anyone is interested in a download link. It sounds so much better if placed on an iPod or CD and played through some halfway decent speakers! Thanks again! Keep checking my stuff!
jalonhall 9 months ago