Make Believe (KiwiHiwi Original)

I probably have a million original songs started, but I believe this is the only one that I've ever actually finished. That makes this the first song that I've ever written (with lyrics). I hope it's not too bad.. and I'm sick again! Ahhh! The day before my voice was COMPLETELY gone, and now I have a stuffy nose, so bare with me (once again) =S

By the way, my cellphone starts ringing close to the end, it's on vibrate, but it's still kinda distracting. Sorry!

Have you ever done something, and somewhere in the back of your mind you know that it isn't real or won't last? Whatever's happening is too sweet for you too let go that you'd rather trick yourself to live the lie than to live the reality. This is basically where this song comes from.

LYRICS

Make Believe

Try, close my eyes so I can drift away,
Drift away, so I can
Sigh, take a breath and just feel the day,
Feel the day slip and,
Cry, hold myself, hope it goes away,
Goes away

Its cold and dry, never cease to die,
These tired eyes, and empty lies

CHORUS

So break the obsession
Destroy the prized collection
Stare at your reflection
And make you freeze, make you freeze
And to make you leave, make you leave
To save this self destruction
Is to fall from pride reduction
And to live this world of fiction
Is make believe, make believe
Live a world of make believe
Make believe

Break, this deafening tension,
Its pain to me, pain to me
Take, this cursed addiction,
And set me free, set me free
Fake, this life I know and
Help me see, help me see
It cant be true, I wont follow you,
We will split in two, and we will lose

CHORUS

So break the obsession
Destroy the prized collection
Stare at your reflection
And make you freeze, make you freeze
And to make you leave, make you leave
Control this self aggression
Confess the true confession
And answer this one question
Is this make believe, make believe
Can I live a make believe, make believe

Oh, oh, oh,
Is it right to make believe, make believe
Oh, oh, oh,
All I have is make believe, make believe

Im weakened by your smile
My heart races for a while
The most difficult of trials
Is to rid this self denial

CHORUS


Enjoy
-Musicmaker838

Category:

Music

Tags:

• make
• believe
• original
• acoustic
• guitar
• musicmaker838

[LemonCandy42]

omg.

omg.

omg.

you're crazy! Get online so i can yell at you about this. =)

Nice job!!!

[musicmaker838]

=D fanksss

[KaraMarisa]

That was so good!

Not only are you a good guitarist & singer, but you're a good songwriter!

[Boomcorn05]

WOw brilliant. i love this song that you had written.

it feels so true .

loved it :P

[22clipboard]

Holy crap!

Can you email me the chords? O.o

[pilarespinoza]

Holy crap, this is amazing! You're a really great guitarist :)

[deehorses]

The depth of this song is so heartfelt. Keep singing from your heart. You sing truth and who can't relate to that? I like your song. You should finish more songs. You have the ability to reach down into your soul and that touches us. Your voice is beautiful, just let it grow.

[TheDissonantHarmony]

still calms me every time i listen.

you're too good. =P

[mishulika]

great play! despite that the singer was without head

[sdchakrab]

good job.keep t up.

[thewillos]

can i marry u? lol jk nice job :P

[2fools101]

uuuh...

how old are you??

thats amazing!

[13TraceBlaze]

!!! Great! i love it!

but maybe could you teach it to me? like as in give me the chords? please????????

I would be sooooo greatful

[letitsound99]

is a very original,good, an lovely song i realy like y will give it a 5(stars)

continue like that and you wil be great trust me.

you have an incrieble voice

[7thUntoldSorrow]

i love it ^-^

you have a beautiful voice

[SpunkyXeE]

that was very nice....thanks for sharing.

[LightningChevalier]

This is called... amazing.... and I have nothing to say....... Keep going!

[staballemo]

AMAZING! keep writing, and you will be surprised by your own journey as you one day look back and realize how much you've grown..