"I AM FEELING LONELY" ORIGINAL SONG

This is a song i wrote called "I AM FEELING LONELY". I made the music in fl studio. I hope you guys like it !!! and i would like to know your comments tooo !!!

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Lyrics and Music: © SHIVANI GOEL 2009
Written on Oct. 4th 2009



I AM FEELING LONELY


la la laaa laaa....
la la laaa laaa...

There is nobody who can hold my hand
Who can walk with me,
There is no body who can talk to me
Who can see,
That what i am going through
My lonliness is true
There is no clue for me.....


I am feeling,
I am feeling,
I am feeling lonely....

This isn't the way
The way that , it should be,
Tis isn't the end
The end i really wanted,

I don't believe anymore
In the things i was sure
That these are true...

I am feeling,
I am feeling,
I am feeling lonely....

la la laaa laaa....
la la laaa laaa...

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• I AM FEELING LONELY

[musicmania012]

try to be more keen towards the scale progress,voice is in a lower scale than the orchestration is, which is the most important thng to keep in mind wt. nd the singer made few notable out of pitches as well from the begining humming.

but good back ground,orchestration ,good voice nd nice effort

just shared my views.good luck.

[thesinger0011]

thanks

[sandiptube]

The bg music is really good, also your voice. But I felt, the key/scale of bg music isn't sync'ing with your voice..Still, a wonderful attempt.

[thesinger0011]

thanks sandip for the comment !! and about the scale i will try to improve that !!

[ajayv9000208970]

Nice......luvd it

[thesinger0011]

thanksss

[1990Hanan]

but this song is the best song ever i love it

[1990Hanan]

everyone say that this song is so sad but it is like another songs

[shubham12345ful]

very bad song

[monotonMode]

aehm. sorry

the music.. haja.

but you cant sing...

i suggest you that you need muuuuch exsercises for your voice.

[anxietyawaynow]

nice vid's...

[mrabanerjee3]

Sorry the music doesnt go's with it.

[haryz2590]

i came 2 know that this song was written by an iit student who cmmited sucide for a girl n that girl is in coma from then due to the shock ........if its true u don't feel pitty using it as your own creation.....u r an ashole if its true.

[SukoonBrothers]

Great voice.........nice song :)

[jack23kairon]

Beautiful song, lyrics, music, voice is divine, just a little work on the pitching at the end of lines. Rest is just great. Hey how would you like to have your album that is if you haven't signed any contract yet