The quick cuts make the intro really good. I like the silhouette shot! Pretty cool! What a dry sense of humor! I would've ended the clip around 8:36. Or after that with the drum beats, perhaps cut it quicker to increase the action. The black screen with dialogue could use some work from my perspective. Maybe make it a separate scene. Its looking good though! Way to go! You just get better each time. Keep up the good work! Luv ya, Fujikoma's mom.
Good stuff! LOL!
xnorsemanhakesx 3 years ago
The quick cuts make the intro really good. I like the silhouette shot! Pretty cool! What a dry sense of humor! I would've ended the clip around 8:36. Or after that with the drum beats, perhaps cut it quicker to increase the action. The black screen with dialogue could use some work from my perspective. Maybe make it a separate scene. Its looking good though! Way to go! You just get better each time. Keep up the good work! Luv ya, Fujikoma's mom.
mrbaird 4 years ago