Okay so a couple things before you go and judge me lmao:
1. I recorded this at the music hall, so you can hear LOTS of band members practicing in the background.
2. I KNOW how to pronounce "FACADE"...but i was reading the lyrics and kind looked at "fade" while I was reading "facade" and so i kinda got a weird word out of it lmao
3. I know I screw up in a lot of parts but I don't care.
4. I DO NOT CLAIM IN ANY WAY TO BE A PIANO PLAYER....sooooo yeah.
5. It's kind of weird. Cause it's a poem that I wrote, not a song. Here are the lyrics if you want to follow along:
oh the familiar pain
not wanting to be awake
too many cups of coffee
to ease the day
snares of the streets
are more alive
as rain beats against the dim light
heavy feet carrying a broken heart
seeking anything to redeem the start
of what is to so delicately fade
the orbit of another loves facade
so sad the reminder is sickening
untouched lips quivering
pounding pulse in every artery
it's awful how beautiful it is.
still here. alive. wounded,
but alive and feeling.
okay, besides that, what do you think?????
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