I Tried too - Mc Spider (Eminem Influence)

Eminem influence is in the title as I'm wanting to get more views for more feedback. He's an influence but I am doing what I do cuz I love doing it, and I'm being 100% myself. New song recorded at home, my first proper confident home recording and mix. :) The beat is owned by icetrecords at http://www.youtube.com/user/icetrecords

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[manictiger]

I'd turn back the piano and bring the drums up a little.

The lyrics and accompaniment are pretty slick, though. I particularly like those strings.

Keep up the awesome work. Your lyrics have gotten quite eloquent.

[McSpider1066]

@manictiger The music isn't owned by me, the beat maker is mentioned in the description, I just wrote and recorded my vocals onto it. Thanks for your feedback mate, means a lot. :)

[manictiger]

@McSpider1066

I meant that you should relay the info to him.

Stuff like turning the piano down is literally as easy as opening the file, moving a knob via mouse and pressing save.

Anyway, keep it up. Your lyrical skills definitely show.

[McSpider1066]

@manictiger Oh right okay then, will do mate thanks again. :)

[emoskull1234]

this is my fave on of ur raps, nice one

[TheFreestylaaa]

this is sick! tell me wah you think of my version?

youtube.com /watch?v=0gnYCIciUPs&feature=r­elated

[mysticmum]

Brill Steve, Love the lyrics and its looking really good Steve