Stand up comedy practice No. 2

Thanks for your comments on the last video. This is some stuff I have on adverts. I've tried to put a little more humour into this one with a little less random ranting. I'm a little more energetic this time as it was filmed before 00:00. This is the first time again that I've put this material together so it's still very weak.

Please comment with some constructive criticism
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Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• Stand up
• Comedy

[jomayc0ck]

I still rant on ages before I start a joke... why is this? Doh!

[123emmaemma123]

haaa, Juliet's mentioned :L her quotes actually made me piss myself 'Russist' was a main one haha.

well donee, it's very good :)

and dw, i thought the ginger one was pretty funny as i find it quite funny laughing at myself and i know you're kidding.

nice one tho :D i hope you become a comedian x

[TomSouthLondon]

get out infront of a live audience its really the only way to learn. and drop the ginger kid joke,thats mainly becasue i have red hair and just find those punch lines pathetic, try and speak slower and vary the tone of your voice for more impact . remember your taking the audience on a journey they want an experience so try and paint a detailed picture. i could definaltey see you doing well on stage in a year or two though.