(Question for you readers - Do you like it better when I type it in paragraphs or line by line? Let me know.)
Brittne's Point of View:
I was going to lunch to meet Kyle but I saw him making out with Alyssa. I started crying and Alyssa and Kyle looked at me and laughed. Their laughter rang through my ears. I tried to run but I couldn't. Something was holding me back. I turned around and there stood Joe. "I'm the one you want. I love you.", Joe's voice echoed through my brain, trying to understand. I got scared and tried to run again but this time I ran into Alyssa. "You can't always have what you want." I tried to run for a 3rd time but this time I ran into the person I least wanted to talk to right now. It was Kyle. "Come on, baby. I'm sorry." "NO!" I screamed. "You cheated on me!" They circled me all of them talking at once. It was too much for me to handle. I woke up screaming. "Just a dream." I sighed and closed my eyes once again.
Joe's Point of View (POV) :
Should I have kissed her? I mean, she just found out Kyle had been cheating on her yesterday. I have no clue what I'm doing, I've never felt like this. What's wrong with me? There's so many questions but so little answers. I don't know who to go to for advice. Maybe Nick? He's been going out with Bridget for awhile...but he better not tell Bridget, because she'll tell Brittne, and then...I don't know. What if she doesn't feel the same way? Shit! How could I have not thought of this? I kissed her two freakin times! Oh God this is not good...I'm gonna go ask Nick now. I can't go to Kevin...he'd just hold it over me.
Nick's Point of View:
I was rudely interuppted by Joe who just barges in the place. "I was writing a song!" I said. "You're always writing a song, Nick." Joe said. I put my guitar down. "What do you want?" I asked. He sighed. Was something bothering him? "I need some advice." I could barely hear him, he was mumbling. "Joe I can't freakin hear you!" "I SAID I NEED SOME ADVICE!" Joe said louder. I laughed. "Ok ok calm down." He looked like he was about to bite my head off. Geez I was just kidding around with him. I tried to be more sensitive towards him maybe it was serious or something. "Ok I'm being serious now. What's wrong?" He sighed. "Ok well...I kissed Brittne. Twice. And I think she might've kissed me back once but I don't wanna move too fast because she just --" "Broke up with Kyle yesterday!" I cut in. Holy crap Joe is moving fast. I tried to stay calm. "Ok, um...well maybe just go with the flow....for now. And see if she talks to you first. You already made the first move...so yeah." Joe just stared at me. "You're not an expert on girls, huh?" He spat at me. I got a little defensive. "If you are, then why are you here?" That got him. No response. I smirked. "Now do you want my help or not?" He sat down on my bed. "Fine!" Boy, he's huffy. "Ok well here's what you do...."
Kevin's Point of View:
I'm so bored right now. We're not on tour. We don't have any interviews scheduled. I've lost contact with most of my friends since we've been on tour for awhile. There's Brittne and Bridget but they are like 4 years younger than me and I've been hanging out with them a lot lately. Oh I know....I'll call Mandy. Wonder what she's been up to...And what the fuck is Blake's problem? God I hate her. I thought she was cool.
Bridget's Point of View:
Wow...Nick is cool but I don't know. Are things cooling down? We've been dating for 3 months and he hasn't even tried to kiss me! Maybe we aren't meant to be? But he's such a great guy! Ugh! Relationships suck! Are we...in a relationship? I don't know! More confusion...now I know how Brittne feels. God, I feel so bad for her. I'm gonna have a little talk with that idiot asshole Kyle.
i like line by line better
good story!!!
lilghett0gurl 3 years ago
i think i like line by line better too its just so much quicker to type for me i just did it this way because its in point of view but thanks for your opinion (:
JBStoriess 3 years ago