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Hey what up, this is my entry to Alyssa Marie's contest. The piece is entitled Where Do I Begin - basically me reaching out to my future self, not knowing what the response will be. Vibe to it
Lyrics:
Where do I begin as my pen hits the paper?
I started out in the game tryna be a saviour,
But I just couldn't savour the flavour,
So the rhymes of my life started to waver,
Now I crave to rave about being brave,
Tell me future me, do we ever get saved?
Or are our brains still chained and enslaved,
Washed away from the ink waves my rhymes made?
Do you remember how it was when you were me?
Jotting down the rhymes of our mind just to be free?
Just to see a part of me that wasn't reality,
When in actuality I was tryna live a fantasy,
Where do I begin as my pen hits the paper?
The ink trickles on the canvas and paints her,
I need to know what I do, I'm doing for a purpose,
Tell me future me, tell me this ain't worthless
Hook x2
Where do I begin to tell a story of sin?
I don't know how to avoid becoming a "has been",
Tell me future me, tell me how you did it,
How you managed to overcome all these critics.
GOod shyt bro..keep it up
JimitoPhresh718 11 months ago
ey dude real talk i really like ur flow
robertosixninesix 11 months ago
haha that was some ghetto sound editing!! :D
you did good tho!! I gave it a thumbs up
Keep doing your thing bro! Best of luck in the contest!
AD4Audio 11 months ago
Great entry man!
mhodgman50 11 months ago
thanks for the entry Hypnotic! i like how you ended it, everyone can relate to the feeling of wishing they knoew if what they were doing was worth it
alysssaMariiie 11 months ago