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Uploaded by on Jun 2, 2008

Haley woke up at 7 am to the sound of her parents fighting from under the wood floor. She am eighteen years old, and her sister is fifteen. Haley's sister comes into her room.
Makayla: Haley why do they keep doing this?
Haley: I don't know; I guess daddy was drunk again.
Makayla: I'm gonna go meet Danny at the park.
Haley: Have fun and be careful.
Makayla: I will.

Makayla straightens her black hair until her side bang covers the left side of her face and her hair has no waves in it. then, she applies her black eyeliner and eye shadow. Then, she pulled on her skinny jeans and layered tank tops and her roxy flip flops. Makayla ran downstairs and before she could run out her parents of course made a comment on something she was wearing.
Mrs: Vicore[mom]: Oh god, Makayla, can't you at least put something decent on? You look like death is coming.
Makayla: Do you always have to criticize me?
Mrs: Vicore: Because you should dress like a GIRL.
Makayla: I do! I got these clothes in the girl section. Just because its not dresses like you like, it doesn't mean anything at all.
Mrs: Vicore: You know what Makayla? You are such a disappointment.
Makayla: Okay, mom. You tell me that everyday. Im leaving.
Mrs: Vicore: Oh no your not. Your not going to see that boy.
Makayla: His name is Danny and yes I am going to see him!
Mrs: Vicore: Oh no your not. Get upstairs now.
Makayla(breaking out in tears): WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
Mrs: Vicore: Oh stop it, Makayla.
*Makayla runs up to her room, grabs her cellphone, and climbs out her window and runs to the park*
Danny: MAKAYLA! I THOUGHT YOU WERE NEVER GONNA COME!

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  • Hey, if we're gonna call ourselves English speakers, we should speak and write English correctly.

  • love it more!

  • amazing great start please hurry :]

  • that was awesome!!!

  • "She am eighteen years old"

  • next one plz

  • next one soon?!

  • AWESOME

  • great start! post soon!! =)

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