Cursed Blackness - Choking In A Glass Coffin

Band: Cursed Blackness
Song: Choking In A Glass Coffin
Country: Germany

Lyrics:
With no memories he awakes lying on a cold floor.
Slowly he stands up and eyes his surrounding.
Above him is glass.
Below him is glass.
Around him is glass.
He is trapped.
The sun shines relentlessly.
The temperature is raising.
Desperately he is trying to esape from this cell.
Striking the walls until blood is flowing down his arms.
Sweat is gathering on his face.
Distorted reflections of his painful countenance.
The air is getting low.
The faint is overwhelming him.

You can't read the logo???
http://s7.directupload.net/images/110615/95w6nqgd.jpg

Category:

People & Blogs

Tags:

• symphonic
• black
• metal
• cursed
• blackness
• dark
• gothic
• darkness
• choking
• in
• glass
• coffin

[MrUberAnarchist]

Needs a bit more varied structuring in the song. I mean, blast beats are nice, but not continuously throughout the whole song. The guitars seem to be nonexistant in it, so the volume on them needs to be turned up. The vocals need more clarity.

The mixture itself needs a lot more work, everything seems to be muddled together with a crystal clear synth. Each element needs to have its' own space within the song. I know how hard it is to write music, I am a guitarist. I play mostly death metal..

[CursedBlackness]

@MrUberAnarchist if we consider all that we have an ordinary black metal song - and nothing new.. nothing special.....

though we heed your criticism :)

[RaedVS]

N1ce, but .. the organ sounds like it's from a classic arcade game, there's no stable beat throughout the whole song it's just drumming recklessly ... and Dude, no lyrics? C'mon I know it's supposed to be Symphonic but even those have lyrics (screaming words not just screams) ....

[CursedBlackness]

@RaedVS haha, we do have lyrics!!! we added them in the description :D

[sk8rguy4life1123]

fuckin awesome...two questions, is that an organ or a synthesizer, and what is ur logo supposed to be

[CursedBlackness]

@sk8rguy4life1123 it's an organ (ofc not a real one, but a programmed one) - and if you follow the link we added in our video description you will know what out logo is supposed to be =)

[hassi44]

I love it but to be honest... the organ doesn't really display in any other style than a little cartoony so I suggest changing that and your good to go :D

[Nrisagieri]

good, I like the half-finished melodic randomness present throughout the song.

you have potential!

[bastardopagano]

how or where the hell did you record this?

[LongHairedFellow]

Yea this be cool

[LivingdeadMetal]

BEST BAND EVER TROLLKOTZE!

[CRUSHER2983]

to much growls but good besides that

[undertaker27]

get rid of the organ

[twominutepenalty]

less organ more guitar. METAL!!